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Question: Song writing contest - 10 pts?

(Posted by: Maddie_xxx3 on 2009-01-07 17:49:18)

Anybody written a song? Post the lyrics and if it's my favorite, it's best answer. : )

Posted by: Robbie M on 2009-01-07, 17:53:02

SMILE SMILE SMILE SMILE SMILLLLLLLLLLE!!!!!!!! oh yeah! all you gotta do is smile! :D:D :D JUUUUUSSSSSST SMILE then a gimp wont slash your throat wtih a big fat syringe. I FKING WIN.

Posted by: got2B on 2009-01-07, 17:53:15

Have you ever lost that place for your heart in your chest And instead find there a black hole rests? Have you ever found that the night has lost it's wonder? and instead you have hateful thoughts to ponder? Have you ever lost sight of a life that was once true? Guided by your heart and by logic, too? Did you ever think that there would come a time, when the love of this world wasn't worth a dime? Do you remember what it is like to love? Oh, so long ago with the heavens above? Hearts are gone Love is lost Where is this world now at what cost?

Posted by: Amanda E on 2009-01-07, 17:53:32

Chasing pavements by adele??? I've made up my mind, Don't need to think it over, If I'm wrong I am right, Don't need to look no further, This ain't lust, I know this is love but, If I tell the world, I'll never say enough, Cause it was not said to you, And that's exactly what I need to do, If I'm in love with you, Should I give up, Or should I just keep chasing pavements? Even if it leads nowhere, Or would it be a waste? Even If I knew my place should I leave it there? Should I give up, Or should I just keep chasing pavements? Even if it leads nowhere I'd build myself up, And fly around in circles, Waiting as my heart drops, And my back begins to tingle Finally could this be it Should I give up, Or should I just keep chasing pavements? Even if it leads nowhere, Or would it be a waste? Even If I knew my place should I leave it there? Should I give up, Or should I just keep chasing pavements? Even if it leads nowhere Should I give up, Or should I just keep chasing pavements? Even if it leads nowhere, Or would it be a waste? Even If I knew my place should I leave it there? Should I give up, Or should I just keep on chasing pavements? Should I just keep on chasing pavements? Should I give up, Or should I just keep chasing pavements? Even if it leads nowhere, Or would it be a waste? Even If I knew my place should I leave it there? Should I give up, Or should I just keep chasing pavements? Even if it leads nowhere

Posted by: Kaitlin on 2009-01-07, 17:53:39

Mine's... well... suckish. but it's worth a shot.(: You broke my heart. Now we're apart. I can't seem to face the fact that you're gone for now. You chose her over me not the first time; I look back and see. you gave me hope and then you stomped on it. and I can't take it anymore I'm locking the front door you're not coming round here. not coming round and I don't beleieve it yet; 'cause you're the one I won't forget but you're not coming round here not coming round here. I thought I needed you. thought you help me out and pull me through. now I'm sitting here alone. you promised me the world and told me you loved me so. but you took her, and I can't seem to let go and I can't take this anymore I'm locking the front door you're not coming round here not coming round and you had promised me the world but you left me with a speck of dust please don't come around here don't come around here. I told you I loved you; you told me you loved me too you left me for that slut. I cared for you more than she will it doesn't even matter anymore slowly I'll get over you people who care will drag me through I still love you, but I'll move on. 'cause I'm that strong. yeah i'll move on. you will always be my first love. but I get that we're not meant to be. the sweetest guy I know of but you crushed me; you crushed me.

Posted by: ztyler123 on 2009-01-07, 17:53:45

As i reach for the stars i wounder where you are. somewhere up above, looking over me, watching out for us. if you were her right now, if you could feel my pain, but we both know that this is reality, not a game. as we get through this step by step, we know that we'll be ok!

Posted by: Liv on 2009-01-07, 17:53:57

I only got to the chorus.... It's so believable That you find me lovable So am I invisible Or just plain gullible? And you gotta repeat all the "ables " at the end, so it's like an echo. Pretty lame, I know, but it rhymes and it definitely means something to me. By the way... this is copy right! :D

Posted by: Tazzler on 2009-01-07, 17:54:28

Im at a cross road. Just another cross road. Cant find a way to go. Theres no answer to the question inside my head. But just a puzzle instead. This is all my bands got for are song were making right now, but we have alot of others. = )

Posted by: chackothewacko on 2009-01-07, 17:54:31

When i look into your eyes I see butterflies flying by When i feel the touch of your skin uhh.. okay im just making this up from my mind lol

Posted by: Glam Girl on 2009-01-07, 17:54:43

I wa-wa-want you I nee-nee-need you oooooooo ba-ba-baby y cant you see i wa-wa-want you nee-nee-need you your the only thing i need baby please be-be-be with me

Posted by: chrisjoon627@att.net on 2009-01-07, 17:55:30

Here we are once again, wont you bring me back my friend We leave love, check the clock its almost time to go It blows my mind, it brings back instinct I feel confined, the deeper I sink For some time, the more that I think It is sublime, the farthest I’ve sank Your back here once again, stuck in the same old situation You breath whole, breath back in and I got no limitations It blows my mind, it brings back instinct I feel confined, the deeper I sink For some time, the more that I think It is sublime, the farthest I’ve sank Go to sleep, Go to sleep, Go to sleep Im so high Go to sleep, Go to sleep, Go to sleep Im so high Your back here once again, stuck in the same old situation You breath whole, breath back in and I got no limitations Here we are once again, wont you bring me back my friend We leave love, check the clock its almost time to go It blows my mind, it brings back instinct I feel confined, the deeper I sink For some time, the more that I think It is sublime, the farthest I’ve sank Go to sleep, Go to sleep, Go to sleep Im so high Go to sleep, Go to sleep, Go to sleep Im so high Go to sleep, Go to sleep, Go to sleep Im so high Go to sleep, Go to sleep, Go to sleep Im so high

Posted by: Amelia on 2009-01-07, 17:56:00

It started out as a feeling Which then grew into a hope Which then turned into a quiet thought Which then turned into a quiet word And then that word grew louder and louder Til it was a battle cry I'll come back When you call me No need to say goodbye Just because everything's changing Doesn't mean it's never Been this way before All you can do is try to know Who your friends are As you head off to the war Pick a star on the dark horizon And follow the light You'll come back When it's over No need to say good bye You'll come back When it's over No need to say good bye.. Now we're back to the beginning It's just a feeling and no one knows yet But just because they can't feel it too Doesn't mean that you have to forget Let your memories grow stronger and stronger Til they're before your eyes You'll come back When they call you No need to say good bye You'll come back When they call you No need to say good bye I worte this myslef :)

Posted by: Schmo on 2009-01-07, 17:56:38

Once upon a time This one girl asked a question Told me to make a rhyme Through musical expression But I have a confession You can't sing over the internet So you'll have to pretend or take out your old clarinet and come up with a tune I'm sorry girl, but this is the best i can do Haha, that was fun

Posted by: aZnbaBeh on 2009-01-07, 17:56:41

"LIKE RAIN " well she started at the bottom of the ocean where the monsters are then she floated up in a bottle to the surface and she caught some sun well he took her up as a raindrop and she turned into a cloud she was so high so mesmerized she never thought she could come down well he picked her up and then he threw her out (chorus) like rain she's coming down she's gonna pour like a thunder roar just like the day before the storm she's gonna break can't hold anymore like rain well he always said i love you and she always believed it to be true well she put her life in his fairy tale and was missing the signs everyone was seeing so well he was throwing her out but she couldn't tell (repeat chorus) she covers her eyes she can't believe she's coming down surrounded by false securities and now she's coming down but this time she's coming around (repeat chorus then fade) it's not really mine but i think it's the prettiest song EVER!! my best friend's older sister made it and she sings it uh-mazingly! i <3 you indya nicole!

Posted by: Evie on 2009-01-07, 17:57:42

I only made up the chorus to a song, the rest isn't finished [CHORUS] because I never got a call from you and your lies left me standing in the dark with tears in my eyes why did you pretend to be more than a friend when all you are is a jerk

Posted by: Jeni on 2009-01-07, 17:58:08

Here it goes...it's pretty good i think It's called red light My world used to be a big bed of roses And now all that's left's a bunch of stupid poses I used to wanna be the girl on the magazine I didn't realize it was as good as it seems My life is falling apart I can't even catch my breath And now my sanity's the only thing that I have left I don't wanna be the cheater in this game But it doesn't seem my life is the same I want this to be over and all else to show I would've tried to hide except there's nowhere left to go Oh Oh So, Show me the red light And where you draw the line Bring this to my sight And tell me that you are fine...

Posted by: technicolor.dreams on 2009-01-07, 17:59:31

Trapped in the cell that your arms make around me, Never again will I see the light that surrounds me Forever to live in a sedated state, quick, help me escape before it's too late You told me you'd treat me right and you didn't You swore you'd never leave me But you did I'm so sick, and tired of all the sh*t you gave to me why can't, I just quit leave it all to you and be FREE______ FREE_____ FREE! You left me here, to be defeated in the dust here, among broken promises and broken hearts but the thing you didn't see, was that I have no intention of staying here, all al-one You told me you'd treat me right and you didn't You swore you'd never leave me But you did I'm so sick, and tired of all the sh*t you gave to me why can't, I just quit leave it all to you and be FREE______ FREE_____ FREE! How dare you use me as your trophy, then drop me like a useless copy one day you will get what you deserve what goes around, comes around You told me you'd treat me right and you didn't You swore you'd never leave me But you did anyway I'm so sick, and tired of all the sh*t you gave to me You left me here, to be defeated in the dust here, among broken promises and broken hearts but I got up and walked way

Posted by: DramaGeek32 on 2009-01-07, 18:01:18

There once was a duck named moe-o-o-o he had webbed feet and a bow-o-o-o-o he ate moldy cheese and got sick he dated a elephant who liked carrots and lightbulbs they watched historical fiction he had an aliigater son and they went on vacation to the fruit market and ate moldy cheese OOOOOO (CHORUS) La la la the duck had an alligater baby me oh my he is eating a tangelo ooooh..tangelo is half tangerine half pomelo now the duck is eating sushi for breakfast yesterday he had a glass of orange juice now the fashion model is in town half cat, half rhino...something now think of that old duck moe who had a bow wedged between his toe the duck and his elephant wife live in Guam-m-m-m-m and the alligator son goes to harvarddddd he is getting his masters in lightbulb fixing! THE END!!

Posted by: baby;] on 2009-01-07, 18:03:17

I didnt finish it. im sorry it took me this long to figure out why i havent reached out for a helping hand and now i'm in so deep feeling like nothing will ever save me as a little girl i would pray for the little things didn't really mean a thing to me until i walked the streets of the real world no i'm not that little girl anymore i learned from you to be weak cause you never thought it through about my dream and who i want to be is all gone cause now its just me just me living in reality follow my dreams but i will always be scared afraid of rejection because my whole life ive always been compared to being 2nd best oh oh

Posted by: painfrancais on 2009-01-07, 18:05:51

Have you guys copyrighted these lyrics? For all you know this is some lazy musician looking for a new hit song. Gee, why didn't I think of this?

Posted by: Anastasia V on 2009-01-07, 18:20:47

Heres an Original and copyrighted by me dont take I am 12 Copyright Anastasia Velasquez© ❤I cant wait❤ four o'clock waiting while you come to me for a sweet love that we share while you hum my lullaby in my hear midnight strikes then I'm dead asleep you watch me until the next day and then it comes and we fall in love once more over and over the love is so strong and even if they see me as this immortal girl I will have you to believe me to make me strong and I will always know that I will love you yes or no tell me should I become like you or stay the same and be amazed by our love or be the one to blamed what about love? what about us? just hurry up and do what you have to do! bite me don't lie to me saying that your done Don't lie to me kiss me baby one more time i know by now that your a vampire and baby I'm all the way so bite me don't lie to me saying that your done don't lie to me Just bite me then I'll be like you and Alice + Jasper, Emmett + Rosalie+ Carlisle + Esme are nothing compared to you and me I'm your exact brand of heroin Lion and lamb, well thats what we've always been that's me and you but get it over with just turn me into a vampire like you no need to read between the line it just you and me ill always be your brand of heroin and forever we will be the lion and the lamb perfectly matched together with peace and love you'll see that we are here are each other